I took into consideration the ideas given to me during our critique and added more "doodles", rearranged the layout and finely edited a few exisiting elements to complete my final self portrait.
Even better! I love the added doodles behind and on top of the pictures. It also feels even more balanced with your edited arrangements. It might just be a trick of the eye due to the different picture placements, but your colors even look more vivid- they work together very well. Bravo!
ohhhhh!! I love this! im glad you took the text out and added your own touch to each of the stories that are going on. this looks so cool! much more journal like and the doodles look sweet. the offset of your photos make it a stronger piece too. way to go!!
Rearranging the photos does break up the balance between the left and right sides. I enjoy it more with the doodles you added to the pictures and background pages, (I still liked it a lot before though too)
I love the doodles, to me now it seems more like a finished journal entry compared to before when it seemed like you stopped in the middle. You artwork is fun and active. I did like the arrangement of the larger picture in the top, but either way it looks amazing. awesome job!
I really like this one even more! Losing the text was a good idea, it was kind of confusing having it there. The new doodles make this seem like an exciting scrapbook-journal. Moving around the composition makes it look great, as well; now my eye can just wander all around your page because it has movement!
This is so intimate! I love it. Changing the picture order really helped add balance. The extra doodles added personality and believeablity. It doesn't looks so much like a template anymore.
Even better! I love the added doodles behind and on top of the pictures. It also feels even more balanced with your edited arrangements. It might just be a trick of the eye due to the different picture placements, but your colors even look more vivid- they work together very well. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteohhhhh!! I love this! im glad you took the text out and added your own touch to each of the stories that are going on. this looks so cool! much more journal like and the doodles look sweet. the offset of your photos make it a stronger piece too. way to go!!
ReplyDeleteRearranging the photos does break up the balance between the left and right sides. I enjoy it more with the doodles you added to the pictures and background pages, (I still liked it a lot before though too)
ReplyDeleteI love the doodles, to me now it seems more like a finished journal entry compared to before when it seemed like you stopped in the middle. You artwork is fun and active. I did like the arrangement of the larger picture in the top, but either way it looks amazing. awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI really like this one even more! Losing the text was a good idea, it was kind of confusing having it there. The new doodles make this seem like an exciting scrapbook-journal. Moving around the composition makes it look great, as well; now my eye can just wander all around your page because it has movement!
ReplyDeleteThis is so intimate! I love it. Changing the picture order really helped add balance. The extra doodles added personality and believeablity. It doesn't looks so much like a template anymore.
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